by Liliana Hart
Kindle Edition – Read August 4, 2012
Length: 49 pages
In this novella, bad boy, Dane MacKenzie, is coming home to Surrender, Montana. It’s been ten years since he left the woman he loved behind to make a name for himself, and now he’s bound and determined to claim her once and for all.
But Charlotte Munroe has no desire to welcome home the Prodigal Son with a fatted calf. The bitterness of Dane’s betrayal runs deep, and she has no plans of letting him back into her life. Especially since she’s trying to protect the son Dane isn’t aware exists from heartbreak, since she’s sure he’s only going to walk out of their lives again.
This is a book written solely for the sex, I get that there are a lot of people who really like that so that’s not the issue I have with this book. It’s just that the sexy scenes weren’t sexy and there is just a suspension of disbelief that I just couldn’t attain. I mean I GUESS I can see jumping the bones of the guy who left you broken-hearted and pregnant (even though he didn’t know about it) as soon as you see him, even though you just tried to maim him. I can understand the guy being all hot and bothered by her but when the guy finds out this big secret and he just is all, whatever, I’m here now wish I knew before, now let’s go have sex. That’s weird, a guy is either going to be super pissed or scared off by Charlotte’s deceit. THEN, THEN oh hey we’ve been apart for 10 years, let’s get hitched….really because in 10 years you don’t think either of you have changed at all?!? Ok, this is a book about the sex not the story, but really both aspects are pretty lacking…but I guess it was free…so…
“She’d loved being called Charlotte, but only by Dane. When he said it, it made her feel beautiful, special.”